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Silent Path by ~kawohi:iconkawohi:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Love... hmm such a fleeting emotion for me.
©2004-2009 ~kawohi
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I've been down that road of silence,
I thought I was insane,
I pondered finding love,
Hoping it would chase my fears away,
Though I was blind in searching,
Hoping I could see,
Someone out there,
Who could love me for me,
More of a mockery,
As I wept tears of pain,
Thinking I had found something,
Yet it only slipped away,
Memories drive me to the brink,
Of dissillusioned thoughts,
How could I have ever thought,
That I could find someone with a heart,
A heart filled with happiness,
A heart that could be mine,
A heart that breathed love,
Until the end of time.
I was wrong,
I know this now,
To fall in love again,
Upon my heel I turn..
To tread down my silent path again.

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~creeront Jan 30, 2004, 10:44:59 PM
Ordinarily, I dismiss such poems without much more than a glance, but this poem is definitely of a higher quality. Perhaps it's the more complicated use of words, disillusionment, and other emotions that make this poem stand out. Good work.
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~rudiichuu Jan 31, 2004, 1:38:54 PM
I wish I could say more, other than 'I like this'. Moody work appeals to me, and.. I dunno, I'm so.. NOT good at poetry, so I hae no good basis to judge. Eh. ^^;
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~UnrecognizedDisguise Oct 20, 2006, 8:49:42 AM
Wow, really lovely job. I like how you portrayed this, and I like this poem.

--
I wish I could live free, hope it's not beyond me.
Settling down, it takes time...

A Freudian Slip is when you say one thing, but really mean your mother.
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